MAIN MAGAZINE ADVERT: edit 3

Main magazine advert edit 3

Mystery jets promotional material as seen on their social media

I wanted to keep the magazine advert simple to attract focus to the important text much like the Mystery Jets promotional graphics.
My text includes tour dates, date of album release, record label, social media accounts, distributors, band name and album title. 
What I have done: I have tried to neaten up the advert by moving the dotted line associated with the tour dates to the right as well as creating more of a white shadow behind the captive city text as I feel it looks more effective. 
Next: I will carry on re ordering.